Reviews for The Girl With The Broken Smile
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
I like the repetition a lot.. the whole idea of a fake smile is written about a lot, but I like how you describe it... and also have a bit of hope in that second to last stanza
Emphasis chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
Very nice rhythm to this.:) I liked it.:)