Reviews for Willow
ygg chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Such gentle, almost fragile imagery. It's almost a statement of the peaceful humility of a great Tree. Great!
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
I like this. The imagery is soft and quiet, but definitely still there. Good job portraying the willow tree. Well done.
BelovedOfAslan chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
It was great; my only suggestion is that maybe the lines shouldn't be quite so continuous, you know what I mean? If you wrote it out normally, this would be a complete sentence. The great part about this form is that you can throw little bits of things together, and they form a mosaic, so to speak, of your subject. But really, this is a great start! And I personally love willows.