Reviews for Skeletons
A.Teen Psycho chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Wow. This poem feels like some times in my life. It's very realistic in a metaphorical way. "Rejection meets you at every exit" is my favorite line. I also liked the opening part about the soldier.

This is a good poem. Good job. Keep posting.
Polished Gem chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
You know why this poem appealed to me? Because it reminded me of a time in my life. I think I was in sixth grade at the time. Anyway, I was lonely and depressed and shielded from the world by my insecurities. I couldn't reach out to them and they just ignored me as a result. I was a blip on the map. I'd go home at night and curl up and just wish that I could sleep forever because the darkness in sleep was the only place where the pain did not, and could not exist...Yikes, that's dreary-sounding. It's good that I'm over that stage of life. Haha.

Anyway, as for name suggestions based on your poem:

Simple Wish

Deserting Soldier


Inky Somber Mind

Closet of Skeletons


Or... Peace in Murky Light

Dusk Fall

Forget Dawn

Broken from the timeline

Forgotten Angel

Scattered Worries

Shield of Insecurity

Um...yeah, going to next poem...Tell me what you think, btw. Tell me if any of these appeal to you. Or if you've come up with any ideas based on the questions I asked you about yourself.