This is a great story, it has a good thriller feel to it, although I have to admit, nothing in it really surprised me. I think you could have made it longer, but the fluidity of the piece made up for it. Thank you.

I love the way you end alot of your stories with the characters being married. it's so sweet. :) also, i like the way you made us think that Ella might have been one of the suspects, even though she wasn't. great job.

BEST CRIME ROMANCE STORY EVER!

Cute story :)

OK. Loved the ending! It was beautiful! I especially loved the little part when he thinks he sees Erik. I cried lol. Im a very emotional person and the tiniest things get to me \ lol

OK so I just started reading this story and I really like it. I find it to be really sad and the part when she's finished singing and then sees her brothers ghost just like killed me. Something like that happened to my uncle and it just gets to me, it's like I can picture it in my head which is probably why I get so emotional lol. But yeah I really, really like it so far and can't wait to finish reading it.

not once did i ever think about thos questions, hm, chapter 4 and i have two suspects! Patrick and that brick wall in the hallway (the guy she bumps into), ne ne, am I even remotely close! Good story so far!

Nevermind what I said in my previous review. I actually have reviewed your story, but I think I was anonymous.

I loved this story. When I first read this story, which was a while ago, I didn't have a fictionpress account, so I was not able to review your stories that I have read. I just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite stories from you, aside from the Phonecalls series.

I really, really really like your story. It's very well written, especially with all the authentic cop lingo and stuff. Nice work, even though I could guess who it was all along!

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What a wonderful story! I loved it! Very good writing.

thanks for the wonderful story! i cried when she was sad about her brothers death. :/

i'm so emotional about deaths and stuff. :P

hehehe. again thanks for the great stories u've written! (including the one i'm commenting on!)

I truly think that youre the only author on this site where I can actually say that their full expanse of stories are worth reading. Your stories have entertained me for the last couple of days and I cant wait until your unfinished stories get completed. Im just sending this to let you know that you have one major fan out there. I absolutely love all your stories and find your plot lines to be awfully creative. I pray you continue to write and post your stories and make them public.

Thanks for the reading materials!

I enjoyed this story immensely. In fact, I liked it better than your series with the band family. I'm glad that you chose to write it. I hope that you write stories of this genre more often.

nice story. the mystery theme was really good!