Aww :) The flow of the story is smooth and captivating and just the perfect length, with a flourishing ending! You are a very talented writer

This is just beautiful. Simply beautiful. I absolutely loved it and all of your other works, but this one takes the cake. I love the way your stories have just the right amount of emotion. Truly exquisite.

Not sure if you are still active on this site since your profile was last updated 2 years ago, but I still wanted to leave a review. This was an incredible one-shot. You poured so much character development and depth into this, along with detailed descriptions of everything. Strangely enough the first few paragraphs are probably my favorite in the whole thing, although the intimate scenes come second, admittedly. Also your descriptions of their intimacy were wonderful, not cheesy sounding or crudely explicit.

I hope you are still writing, even if it's no longer posted on this site.

I loved it!

Isn't he going to ask her to marry him? That was nice :) because there was love but seriously?

This is simply incredible.

MAN DIS IS STUNNING ND BEAUTIFUL! deffo one heck of ONE-SHOT i LOVE it :)

Amazing.

This was so beautiful and perfect... just amazing :)

PERFECTLY WRITTEN! *speechless*

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Three words, " BEST STORY EVER!". Just beautiful, seriously just breathtaking. Literally. Thanks for sharing.

This is the most beautiful one shot I have ever read. I absolutely LOVE it!

Wow... that was... wow.

XOXO

50th reviewer! Good story and more importantly, excellent sex scenes! it cooould have been longer but i like it as one chapter :)