Reviews for Help Me
lymli chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
that's something dark, I mean, it's personal...

but I think it's not that no one will ever know, but sometimes

people are too selfish to care..

it's a good piece.

happy holidays.
CaveDwellers chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I'm thinking that this is about Celia when she got kidnapped. Right? It was the "my voice is gone" line that got me.

This demonstrates a nice learning curve. Of course, it would be bad if this person learned that the world is good, and not just dark. But I suppose that that comes with time.

Couldn't really find a specific beat for it to be like a song or a chant, but I suppose it wasn't supposed to.

And... yeah... that's basically all I have to say about it...

'Til next,

CD 1.0
IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
CELIA! *cries* Joeri, you'd better be up for some major hero work! Why must you do this to us, Qzie? Leave Celia IN A DUMPSTER for TWO WEEKS! Gaah, this is torture! Stay strong, CELIA!

Yeah, the song/poem was really good too!

queen-of-the-sand-castle chapter 1 . 12/5/2007

Ahem, this reminds of something, but I'll not blacken your day and the reviews with it...

This is based on when Celia in Fine Line gets kidnapped, isn't it?
lovefantasyworkreality chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Oh yeah, I could totally tell this was based off of what just happened in Fine Line, which, incidentally, I still think is cruel that you're going to leave us hanging there for two... whole... weeks. (sob)