|Reviews for Help Me|
| lymli chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
that's something dark, I mean, it's personal...
but I think it's not that no one will ever know, but sometimes
people are too selfish to care..
it's a good piece.
| CaveDwellers chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I'm thinking that this is about Celia when she got kidnapped. Right? It was the "my voice is gone" line that got me.
This demonstrates a nice learning curve. Of course, it would be bad if this person learned that the world is good, and not just dark. But I suppose that that comes with time.
Couldn't really find a specific beat for it to be like a song or a chant, but I suppose it wasn't supposed to.
And... yeah... that's basically all I have to say about it...
| IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
CELIA! *cries* Joeri, you'd better be up for some major hero work! Why must you do this to us, Qzie? Leave Celia IN A DUMPSTER for TWO WEEKS! Gaah, this is torture! Stay strong, CELIA!
Yeah, the song/poem was really good too!
| queen-of-the-sand-castle chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Ahem, this reminds of something, but I'll not blacken your day and the reviews with it...
This is based on when Celia in Fine Line gets kidnapped, isn't it?
| lovefantasyworkreality chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Oh yeah, I could totally tell this was based off of what just happened in Fine Line, which, incidentally, I still think is cruel that you're going to leave us hanging there for two... whole... weeks. (sob)