This was really well written, and I like how you didn't start every sentence with 'he'.

And, well, as soon as I read your summary, I knew what was going to happen, but I still thought it was really good anyway. A nice twist at the end might have been a Salome-style killing, but maybe that's just me?

And, I'll be honest: I laughed so much (in a good way?) when they were having sex. It just...I don't know why. it just made me laugh. xD. I loved it :D.

personally i'm glad you didn't put in the "fluff" ending. it's more realistic.

Uh...that was...unexpected? But still good, I think? Da...

Okay. Am reviewing for the hot man/honey, will expect him in the morning. .

This was quite interesting. What would have made it more interesting was if after the deed was done, he chopped the things head off anyways. But that might just be my view. Anyways, very well written - you get the sense that the main character, Therocles, is a no nonsense guy.

I really like this ending more than the first. Also the whole sex scene was better in my opinion. I liked it. D

As I said before, horny man. And horny monster.

I really don't know what to say... interesting...weird...I don't know. Therocle went to slay it and ended up have sex with it. The horny man.

heh, i remember this story! nice twist :P i think you could have extended it a bit more, tho.

now...

WHAT ARE YOU DOING WRITING THIS WHEN YOU SHOULD BE UPDATING YOUR OTHER STORIES!

*ahem* lovely job.