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Arnieth chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
beautiful. I thought at first that this was someone who was sick and in a hospital and then as I continued to read I thought suicide in the ocean. you weren't alone in thinking sex I have 4 others. and you were all wrong. Its about a compeditive swimmer going back to the pool after being away for to favs
Inflaming Kaliope chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
It is cute in a sad way. I like it.

"My sore throat cleared for one last breath,

Waves part to crash as tears meld against the sea.

How was I to know I’d be alone?"


"Turning blue, I cannot breathe.

Shut my eyes and just accept."

Those are my favourite lines. Beautiful. Really.