What the fuck is wrong with this girl dumbshit Jennifer? Is she crazy or something? That guy is too good for her.

He really is a stalker! If a girl says no, it means no.

Sorry but this whole story frustrates me... jen is stubborn as fuck. im with brent 100% he literally didnt do anything wrong

I love this book. It needs to get published and made into a movie or anime. This book deserves popularity, it made me laugh and swell. I'm so glad I clicked on it. :) x

You should really send this to book publishers! You are a really talented writer, and I think this deserves to be an actual book! Great job!

Sorry for the language but, this story is FUCKING EPIC! I LOVE IT! and I personally can't understand why it doesn't have like 1000 or something reviews. Come on people. Whoever is reading the reviews trying to guess if they should read this like I do, JUST READ. Trust me it is amazing! To the author, wonderful work, it touched my heart. My best friend also had an abusive father and her mother died when she was little so reading this story I remembered her. You are amazing NeverTrustFate !

that was such a sweet story! loved the ending XD. stayed up until 4am reading it XD how cool am i? :P

Aww! Sigh. She so deserved the happy ending. The parenting chapters were probably the most funny... _* Loved it.

Oh gosh, I just LOVE this story.

I had no account before so I couldn't submit reviews, and then I lost track of your story. I'm so glad I found it again! . Your story is so touching, especially with the part about her father and everything.

love the story!

it was excellent.

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best case of child abuse story i have ever read. i actually empathised with this character - most times i just get offended. why? because i know exactly how it feels to be abused, and i hate it when it's misrepresented or written without that proper in-depth emotional side. i think it's safe to say that this'll be going in my c2!

I dunno if I ever reviewed, but I'm doing it now.

I remember first finding your story - you were on chapter two.

Anyhow, I want to tell you that I'm in absolute love with your writing.

The characters, plot-thing, setting, and EVERYTHING.

It was SO awesome.

I love the Epilouge, too.

The 'rapist' scene was the best.

I laughed...

I am very impressed. Your writing technique is very good and you make the story flow very nicely. I also like how Jen seems to get sidetracked when she talks about something totally random and then chastises herself to the readers.

If I met a guy like Brent, I would have slapped him like Jen should have, but he's so retardedly hilarious, it's worth it not to do that. I agree that you should consider writing a second book because the characters are very well-developed and a lot of people like this book.

omg where can I buy myself a Brent? lol

i loved how you ended this story. it was great