Beautiful

Cute and Sweet :)

I love your story, especially the part when Jesse McCartney song Daddy's little girl came on.

Some one once asked me why some people love reading romance novels so much. My answer? We yearn for that kind of love and romance that we know is out of our reach.
Do you know that those words you wrote are so true. And what's more? it is not even unbelievable! You know, you should totally publish all these one-shots as a new book of fairy tales. No offense, but like you said, we yearn for THE unattainable. Sure some may have gotten lucky in this world. But hey, everyone knows this world is SO not fair...Reading that line, was like being hit by a red brick on the face, the harsh reality.
Have you ever even once, just wished this world would be like a fairy tale for you? I've always wished that. But as I said before, no matter what all stories say, it just doesn't happen to girls like me. I really hope that you get your fairy tale ending in your life. You deserve it...
Your well-wisher

I love this story! Great writing and very amusing!

Aw! So sweet! I want a guy like that!

This is so cute! And he left because of a family thing right? And it is true, about what you said about why people read romance books. I've come to the conclusion that I really don't expect guys to be overly romantic.. but I do expect it in my stories haha. Or well I don't really expect them to be romantic at all, just polite.

Love the story!

~*~Ngoc1231~*~

P.S: Love the mom :D

Aww, that was great. I hate when time is wasted, but then again, at least they found each other. This was so sweet and I really did like it. Thanks for the read!

Ah another romance we wish were real and happening to us.

I really do wonder where you get these ideas, but as long as they keep coming I will never have a problem:)

I'm starting to think you really REALLY like Jesse McCartney, considering you used three of his songs and Beautiful Soul in your other story.

Anyways, thanks for writing yet another, awesome story!

Adorable!

that was cute :) but on that last part, when it said 'two years ago', does it mean two years 'later'? because I'm a bit confused about that. But still, cute :)

loved it! you're a great author. write more!

Aww... how nice. Short and sweet - I like it.

This is so sweet, I love it. Even though I hate Jesse McCartney.

This was wonderful! I went a bit teary when she got the package, and I thought she was never going to see him again. But great ending. I'm glad it worked out for them. (: