|Reviews for Sometimes Sunrises|
| the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Excellent. So hopeless and procrastinating, really wonderful.
the Stranger in the moonlight
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Your writing is so beautiful..it just captures the interest of the reader and makes them feel, not just know, your message in this poem. I really liked how 'In times like this some say today' sounded in the second line.
| lost for words chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I like how darkly abstract this is, yet it is still relatable and feels very real.
| the face in the window chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
This is just...beautiful. I can picture everything perfectly in my head.
So glad you're back!
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
It's really beautiful. I can really see a girl laying down in the grass and looking at the sun. Great job.
| SirScott chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Good poem, it's good to see you posting again.
| lovelaced chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
Absolutely beautiful. The words were so rich and elegant in a way. The imagery was great and I could picture pale girl standing outside in the sun, kissing the air.
Thank you so much for your great review, I really appreciate it and I am glad that you enjoyed reading my new poem!