Reviews for Sometimes Sunrises
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Excellent. So hopeless and procrastinating, really wonderful.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Your writing is so just captures the interest of the reader and makes them feel, not just know, your message in this poem. I really liked how 'In times like this some say today' sounded in the second line.
lost for words chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I like how darkly abstract this is, yet it is still relatable and feels very real.
the face in the window chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
This is just...beautiful. I can picture everything perfectly in my head.

So glad you're back!

Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
It's really beautiful. I can really see a girl laying down in the grass and looking at the sun. Great job.

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Good poem, it's good to see you posting again.

lovelaced chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
Absolutely beautiful. The words were so rich and elegant in a way. The imagery was great and I could picture pale girl standing outside in the sun, kissing the air.

Great job.


Thank you so much for your great review, I really appreciate it and I am glad that you enjoyed reading my new poem!