Reviews for Twelve Dancing Nobles |
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Greenyeti chapter 7 . 8/16/2015 Russian numbers! Of which i had to jog my memory a bit. I can't figure out where Raz fits in. |
Fobbster chapter 10 . 8/1/2015 Lol you sound so panicked and awkward in the beginning of the an. |
Fobbster chapter 9 . 8/1/2015 Oooooh patrick. Or whatever his name is. Damn. My memory is so good. |
Fobbster chapter 7 . 8/1/2015 Oh lol. |
Fobbster chapter 6 . 8/1/2015 Oh, Quentin. |
Fobbster chapter 5 . 8/1/2015 Toi just honking in the background XD. |
Fobbster chapter 4 . 8/1/2015 Just casually slips in a deathly hallows reference there. If it's just a plain invisibility cloak, well. |
Fobbster chapter 2 . 8/1/2015 Harsh. "Hey, you have a walking stick, so get out of my house!" |
Fobbster chapter 1 . 8/1/2015 Oh, this is the swans, isn't it? Loving this already. |
Guest chapter 17 . 2/20/2015 Fave pairing was the three some, it was the best part of the story, if it wasn't a threesome with the way things were i would have died o.o |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/20/2015 Their names sound like numbers xD but I don't know the language so i'll leave it at that lol |
Kamryn The Wanderer chapter 16 . 1/22/2015 yay, love triangles that end in threesomes are my favorite thing! |
Kamryn The Wanderer chapter 8 . 1/22/2015 This one is in Spanish. Uno, Spanish for One. Zeace sounds like Seis which is Spanish for Six. Sinko sounds like Cinco which is Spanish for Five. I bet the rest are named Doz, Trace, and Kataro, or something of the sort, hmm? (do I get a cookie?) |
4-Starry-Night-8 chapter 17 . 5/27/2013 final questions; 1) Favorite pairing - pass 2) Cleverest part that's remebered best - making the princess drink the sleeping potion 3) Color curtains in the throne room - shear white; natural light and swan feather color 4) Cheaste and who? - I like Quinten; and Chaste was willing brace pain for him 5) Wrong with story - Your plot was under develpoed; you tried to keep it whort while explaining every thing. You left out important details and added rather unimportant ones. If you took more time to devlpo your plot your characters would have devloped more fully. 6) Idea for Piat and Saynk - pass 7) weird most definatly weird, but interesting. |
Depth-of-Field chapter 17 . 3/27/2013 D'aww. They're all cute, though a bit disgustingly so at the end. :P |