Reviews for The New and Improved Annie Bananie |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting :D taking a 'Chaysing Elliot' twist isn't it :) teacher sounds cute, wonder if it's going to turn out to be teacher/student or dodger/annie. hmm. the tough mysteries in life! :) love it! -x- Padmai -Hidden Assassin- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm.. I like it so far :) Didn't quite expect it to be the bad girl/somewhat good guy. I'm soo used to reading the badboy/goodgirl stories so this story is refreshing :) Can't wait to read more! :D -x- Padmai -Hidden Assassin- |
![]() ![]() ![]() drama filled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was awesome! Can you beleive that I read the entire thing in a day? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was really sweet. But man did they have a lot of problems getting there. I still really liked there was a happily ever after. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh! when i read the part where the noodle went down the wrong tube i cracked up tthis is really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() u REALLY! need to write an epilouge to this its really good and super sweet. i think an epilouge would be better closure to the story (and im not just sayin that because i want more of this story although tahts a MAJOR bonus) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have seven words to discribe your story... Amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The whole story was a bit rushed but I thought it was pretty good. If it was more paced, the story would have been better but it definitely wasn't horrible. Nice job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() When people just jump into a story, it makes it seem incomplete but the way you did it made it seem natural. You really showed the characters and I liked it. How old is Anna anyways? You never really said (or are you going to? o.O). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Suh-wet action. Loved it! The ending was fine, don't worry about it. ]] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story it's very dramatic)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! I thought that was an EXCELLENT ending. Vague endings are better because it gives you hope. I loved this story so much, but now I'm kinda of releaved it's over, but only because it was such a good ending and now we have no more ups and downs to go through. :) New story soon? ~Marisa~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg.. best ending :D I love Dodger and now Annie again too, now that she got her head straight! :) It's cool that even though you had a happy ending, it was also realistic. I loved it! So, are you doing an epilogue? . Kisses, midnightbeauty |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! i loved this story! keep writing stories! |