Reviews for To Have and to Hold
Otakuami chapter 28 . 7/13
Very well written character thoughts, realistic scenarios and passionate lust scenes.
Otakuami chapter 22 . 2/8/2020
Man this story was so sweet, I read it in a single night. Once I started it, I simply couldn't stop. Rachel's personality as well as Adams were very likeable
Shailaputri chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Enjoyed reading it
leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 8/30/2015
I'm enjoying your story thus far, but am struggling with frustration due to the number of typos and missing words. The story is good enough that it deserves a thorough edit. In fact, if it holds true-to-form to the end, it is worthy of publication.
palmsaresweaty chapter 7 . 12/24/2014
Am i the only one who thinks this makes no sense? You have a woman who has been battered, emotionally broken and claims she will never marry or have children because of it. and then she suddenly thinks about a marriage proposal from a man she doesn't know who could potentially be a closet killer for the same of a women's shelter? And then Jean who is a social worker - is agreeable to this proposal because she has money and is good looking?!

I'm disappointed in the way this story panned out.
heal me forever chapter 32 . 12/7/2013
Awww... it was beautiful! luved it 3 3
Mihoro chapter 32 . 1/23/2013
Really cute story, would definitely recommend it. Great characters, brilliant plot and a sweet ending that wasn't cheesy. Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed reading it. :D
witeaya chapter 32 . 5/25/2012
u have a good plot here.

the marriage proposal at the beginning was really unexpected.
Brightheart chapter 32 . 2/21/2012
nice story. cute.
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 32 . 4/4/2011
Excellent job!
sappyromancelvr chapter 32 . 1/20/2011
such an awesome story!

Great job with the characters!
BlueberryMuffinMonster chapter 32 . 12/25/2010
LOVE Love love love love
luvsummer chapter 32 . 1/31/2010
This story was great! I'm glad everything worked out! )
FauxAfflictions chapter 32 . 7/8/2009
This story is amazing.

Interesting AND well written.

What more could you want?
53BookTitles chapter 32 . 4/2/2009
YAY :)
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