Reviews for To Have and to Hold |
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![]() ![]() Very well written character thoughts, realistic scenarios and passionate lust scenes. |
![]() ![]() Man this story was so sweet, I read it in a single night. Once I started it, I simply couldn't stop. Rachel's personality as well as Adams were very likeable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying your story thus far, but am struggling with frustration due to the number of typos and missing words. The story is good enough that it deserves a thorough edit. In fact, if it holds true-to-form to the end, it is worthy of publication. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Am i the only one who thinks this makes no sense? You have a woman who has been battered, emotionally broken and claims she will never marry or have children because of it. and then she suddenly thinks about a marriage proposal from a man she doesn't know who could potentially be a closet killer for the same of a women's shelter? And then Jean who is a social worker - is agreeable to this proposal because she has money and is good looking?! I'm disappointed in the way this story panned out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... it was beautiful! luved it 3 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cute story, would definitely recommend it. Great characters, brilliant plot and a sweet ending that wasn't cheesy. Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed reading it. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() u have a good plot here. the marriage proposal at the beginning was really unexpected. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story. cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() such an awesome story! Great job with the characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE Love love love love |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was great! I'm glad everything worked out! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing. Interesting AND well written. What more could you want? |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY :) |