|Reviews for To Have and to Hold|
| leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 8/30/2015
I'm enjoying your story thus far, but am struggling with frustration due to the number of typos and missing words. The story is good enough that it deserves a thorough edit. In fact, if it holds true-to-form to the end, it is worthy of publication.
| palmsaresweaty chapter 7 . 12/24/2014
Am i the only one who thinks this makes no sense? You have a woman who has been battered, emotionally broken and claims she will never marry or have children because of it. and then she suddenly thinks about a marriage proposal from a man she doesn't know who could potentially be a closet killer for the same of a women's shelter? And then Jean who is a social worker - is agreeable to this proposal because she has money and is good looking?!
I'm disappointed in the way this story panned out.
| heal me forever chapter 32 . 12/7/2013
Awww... it was beautiful! luved it 3 3
| Mihoro chapter 32 . 1/23/2013
Really cute story, would definitely recommend it. Great characters, brilliant plot and a sweet ending that wasn't cheesy. Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed reading it. :D
| witeaya chapter 32 . 5/25/2012
u have a good plot here.
the marriage proposal at the beginning was really unexpected.
| Brightheart chapter 32 . 2/21/2012
nice story. cute.
| mylittlePRINCESS chapter 32 . 4/4/2011
| sappyromancelvr chapter 32 . 1/20/2011
such an awesome story!
Great job with the characters!
| BlueberryMuffinMonster chapter 32 . 12/25/2010
LOVE Love love love love
| luvsummer chapter 32 . 1/31/2010
This story was great! I'm glad everything worked out! )
| FauxAfflictions chapter 32 . 7/8/2009
This story is amazing.
Interesting AND well written.
What more could you want?
| 53BookTitles chapter 32 . 4/2/2009
| LupusAries chapter 32 . 3/5/2009
Well a good story i did like it! I liked how you both let them be a bit imperfect. Well i really hated his Stepmother and stepbrother...and i definately diddnt like Sandra. It was an interesting Story good work.
| artistic dreamer chapter 32 . 9/13/2008
aw what a cute story! i loved it! it's so sweet and adorable and adam is like the perfect guy!loved this, especially since the main character has the same name as me hahah :D
| theslykit chapter 32 . 4/8/2008
yay! love this story...wish adam's dad just divorced his wife and left her with nothing though...oh well.