Reviews for Unfold
randomGirl chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
To tell you the truth-I absolutely loved the beginning, but it kind of decreased towards the end. Usually people don't want to see a main character (Bryant) do something bad without a proper explanation or a heartfelt apology. Also readers (people who stop by to just read your work and criticize, like me) want a brave or strong heroine who expects a just treatment from everyone(read Bryant).
Your characters are probably more real, they are imperfect in many ways. The story is yours and you would know the best, right?
J.V.S chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
AWESOME!
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Aw, that's so cute! I loved it :-)
Belly boo1099 chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Cute story!
heal me forever chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
i dnt know hooking up nd still.. dey r in love ..i dnt like dat hooking up part i dnt think in real life ppl will allow dat its CHEATING on her acc to me
xXGenerationUsXx chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Ha-ha, funny! I really liked this one-shot.
lovevictim chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
I like the plot of the story, however I'm going to be completely honest I wasn't fond of the end, like someone mentioned there seems to be lot more to the kiss Bryant shared with Sophie, the excuse he give to Cass doesn't feel true to me, because he could have pushed her away and given some excuse like 'I only like you as a friend' he has cheated on Cass, and for her to forgive him and not think much of it kind of kills this story for me. Nevertheless, you have a lot of talent and although I didn't like the ending it was a nice story.
witeaya chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
brynant was lame.
leavemeialone chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Wow, she tried to be nice to her "friend" except she got damned in the end for it. I am glad that Mara decided to tell her. I can't believe someone would be friends with someone else over for a boy. To use someone is unbelievable. I am glad she decided to screw her "friend".
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
go cassie!
Fantasy's Dreamer chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
yes yes that's what the bitch gets!this was a awesome story to read !
Warrior-Princess06 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
'Wow! That was harsh..haha..but i guess it's a nice fic..! :)
HPRK08 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
AWH FRIKKIN' YEAH! Go Cassidy! I literally whooped after reading this (: Great, awesome, amazing work!

~HPRK
silver rocker1490 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
it's cool but what the freaking hell?haha
SkimSurfBoard chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Nice story, a little harsh, but pretty well written. You could add a little more drama between Bryant and Cassidy though, she could probably be a little more upset with him, and it still seems like there is a little more to the story than Bryant told Cassidy. Just sayin, it sounded a little...mysterious, he COULD have said no, explaining that he wanted to wait for some reason.

Good Story!
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