Reviews for Unfold
PersephonesDarkside chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
AWESOMENESS!

wow... i totally like this story...
duckliy543 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
i would so tottaly be there

saying YEAHAH girl

!

loved the one shott.
groovacious chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Wow catty girl fight. I like the concept and idea of this story but you may want to improve on your language.
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Woah! Yeah girl! Take that you B! Love this.
jase chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
wtf ?

i really liked your summary but he slept with sophia?

and whats with that excuse? " he couldn't be like no"

oh my god that's so pathetic

I wouldn't have taken him back, seriously he practically cheated on her!

-.-
Diamandis chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Aaww, that was really good. You should make it into a proper story, I would definitely read it and I'm sure others would too. So consider it, please *sad puppy dog face*. Btw love the names you picked!
Enigmatic Night chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Hey!

Muahahahaha.. yeah I loved the last three words.
The Midnights Sun chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
wow.

that was SO good!

i was like dang cassidy, how could you do that to your best friend!

then i got it.

so good job!

i love it so much!

its going on my favorites!

you should write more!
firefly of hell chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Revenge is sweet... _

One thing that bugs me it how confusing it was at the beginning. Was Cassidy already going out with Bryant but their relationship was a secret? (Why?)
Bazooka Joy chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Haha I love this story! Nice and funny. But I'm confused on something...did Bryant really hook up with Sophia or did he make up a story so Cassidy would finally claim him in public? That kinda got me in the end.
lover-and-fighter chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
omg, i love it! ]

that chapter totally rockked!

haha, i love the last line 'take that bitch'

priceless ]

add more to itt.
A Handful of Rain xx chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
adorable! love it. maybe you should make it into a story instead of a one-shot. just a suggestion
Jazza chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
i love this story :) it's so good, because it just shows how you shouldn't let people walk all over you even though they're close to you. good job :O)
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