Reviews for The Blood Pool
bonghi chapter 8 . 5/6/2010
I found this story today and ate it up in one seating. It is unique and extraordinay and I like it very much. Hopefully it will be updated one day in the (near)future.
Venomous Vengeance chapter 8 . 10/28/2008
dear stilled heart

it's a wonderful story. i know that liam and olivia are supposed to fall in love but i think the story would be much nicer if she and max were to fall in love. i was wondering where you got the name farah, i think you mentioned it in either chapter one or chapter two. it such an unusual name, and also it happens to be mine:) such a coincedence! well i suppose that's all i have to say for now.

best luck in completion of your stories,


p.s i like your other stories as well they are so much better than mine.
Omnia Vanitas chapter 8 . 9/11/2008
I hope you decide to write more soon. I love this story and the other two before it.
ChristianAngel01 chapter 8 . 8/1/2008
already see the drama that is coming from this story lol

It is great I love it I know it will be awhile before you update I just hope you do so very soon :D
autumnsprite chapter 8 . 1/27/2008
i just read this and i cant believe how inthralling this story is! please don't put it on hiatus forever, the characters are so three dimensional, so real, i need to see what happens to them all! i really really really love this story, i hope one day you publish it because it is so unique and birlliant :D
Faith Adeline chapter 8 . 1/14/2008
You gots to do what you gots to do. But, I'll be in anticipation for more :)

Lavender Blood chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
Sorry didn't reply to the last chapter, I had a lot to do! But, wow, this is getting really good! For some odd reason, I sorta feel sorry for Liam...
xBlackSoul chapter 7 . 1/11/2008
I don't know, but know I think Max is a better match for Fern:P And maybe Liam for Olivia, but he is stil a Dhampir so to dangerous for her maybe?:P update soon, it was a nice chapter.
Faith Adeline chapter 7 . 1/9/2008
I liked it, very good chapter. Fern is fun, I like having her around. Keep up the great work and update soon!

only pretending chapter 7 . 1/9/2008
Ohh! I'd say this is the best chapter so far. They keep getting better and better. :P

And I like Liam more than Max. I just read in your a/n you asked why everyone likes Max more, well I don't! Liam sounds pretty damn awesome if you ask me.

Good job.

Have a nice day! :)
KiraLove chapter 6 . 1/6/2008
I truely thought I added you way before Christmas, and was simply dissapointed you hadn't published anymore. My computer must have had a glitch. Anyhow, I'm glad that I found your story once more, and I'm enjoying it immensly.

-Kira Love
Euphorialie chapter 6 . 12/30/2007
I don't know why, but I still like Max more. Maybe it's because I don't know what's wrong with him and with Liam it's kind of obvious what his issue is. So Max is more of a mystery...makes him sort of intriguing. I'll probably get to liking Liam more after Max turns out to be an incurable git, but until then... So this was another wonderful chapter; the kiss was awesome and Liam's little spectacle was interesting. Everything is stretched really tight, like something is going to go horribly wrong at any second, probably soon and the suspense is getting high. So, until next time!
only pretending chapter 6 . 12/29/2007
I love your story!

Two questions though:

Why aren't Oliva and Max announcing their marriage?

And if Liam thinks he's stronger than a vampire, why doesn't he just jump on Oliva and drink her blood? Or is she too strong for him while he's in a weak state?

Also, when the vampire's around humans, how do they lie about no eating food? Wouldn't people wonder why the vampire families dont eat the food?

Anyways, sorry about all the questions. :s I always ask way too many questions, it annoys everyone.

Great work for this chapter!
xBlackSoul chapter 6 . 12/29/2007
nice chapter again, update soon. I like liam a little, but max I like more, I think... hahah
Cloaked Divinity chapter 6 . 12/29/2007
Couldn't she just give him a vile of her blood or something?

Or would he get addicted to it?


Poor Liam


Max and Olivia are getting closer


They seem good too.

But the Olivia and Liam match is just so much better

Lovely chapter
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