Reviews for too bad napkins won't do it
bitterpaper chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
Me too.

I like the way the napkins cleaning up little messes just won't cut it for real messes. You can't just wipe things away and except other people whom you've hurt to pretend like it never happened.

Very nicely done.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
aw, i like this. i could picture the imagery very well.
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
I liked this. Short but powerful and very well writen. Good job C.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
very good. I love the meaning and metaphor of this. keep up the wonderful work.

Faith
WholeHeart chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
It's a good metaphor.