Reviews for Decision Time, Peanut |
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![]() ![]() ![]() meh, it's the love. you made me feel.. everything at the same time. rah. |
![]() ![]() I loved it. mission successfully completed in my opinion, i'm such a sucker for this genre ;O) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was one of those stories that made my stomach turn to a a jumbled pile of knots. It was a story that was gripping and I felt like I was there, feeling her pain and anguish as if it were my own. I can't say I particularily enjoyed the storyline but the way you wrote it was amazing. I loved the description of the storm especially. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really i like dis storyy! it waz realii interestingg! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, that situation sucks for all three of them. i'd hate that! it was a good oneshot though ~ Alenor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() um, wow. There's so many wonderful things to say about this story and yet having just read through it and feeling like i've been on an emotional rollercoaster with them, i cant quite find the words to express them. Truly brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great One Shot... If it were me.. I don't even think I can make a decision at all.. I probably be the one running away and moving away.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was fucking great. DRAMA BIG TIME. bring it on i say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well let me just say. THIS WAS AMAZING. i really liked it and even though its not like what you usually write, you did a really great job of writing it. it evoked emotion in all the right places AND came with a happy(ish) ending. i think if you ever write a story with this type of genre. it would be absolutely fantastic and i would not hesitate in reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww that's so cuteness in a totally not cute way :) i liked it izzie |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it. ive been waiting for you to update your other stories but this just made up for all the time i waited. i feel bad for davey but i like mac. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gwah this is really good. xD i dig the heated passion/angst/romance! my only qualm is that in Mac's dialog, "Mac snorted, 'You think I have any answers for you? I thought it was sorted. I left home and,'" you misspelled "sordid." Otherwise, sexy fantastic story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I normally don't like the whole "first one then the other brother" stuff, but you really did a great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A few comments: It should be "Decision time, Peanut", emphasis on that comma. There are a couple places where you use exclamation points where a period will work just fine. The bulk of the story is good, even if it is long, but there are a few parts where it drags. She keeps going in circles with Mac and the scene with his parents is just confusing. ( |