wow that was amazing.i usually dont read oneshots but im glad i read yours.

i actually really loved it :D

i really liked this story, even if the end was a little sad, because she lost davey- she may not love him, but i think he was still a friend ... but it was also a happy ending

i think you did a great job in describing the emotion chaos and you also made the characters human and therefore the story in general pretty realistic. I enjoyed how she and mac got together and the way they acted around each other, distant yet loving ...

wonderfully done!

LG

a good one

aww

i loved i loved ]

hahaha and yes, i do agree with your inability to finish stories :P

and nsw. is. so. much. cooler. than. sa.

hahahha

just to let you know :p

I have mixed feelinga about this. Overall I loved it but I think the ending could have been better.

As one-parters go, it was amazing. I'm interested in looking in to some of your other works, even though this is completely different from some of the others.

This was wonderful, as everything you write is. I really enjoyed it, and I love Mac's character. I am looking forward a new chapter on your other story though! Good job!

'I was incandescent with rage!' I can just imagine her hair rising upwards and flames flaring up behind her. And you know... this doesn't have to be one-shot...

Laugh my ass off, I love the random guy that's all "Cover up your boy bits!"