Reviews for Decision Time, Peanut
JT FAN chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
wow that was amazing.i usually dont read oneshots but im glad i read yours.
mashaskripka chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
i actually really loved it :D
Ms ShiSha chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
i really liked this story, even if the end was a little sad, because she lost davey- she may not love him, but i think he was still a friend ... but it was also a happy ending

i think you did a great job in describing the emotion chaos and you also made the characters human and therefore the story in general pretty realistic. I enjoyed how she and mac got together and the way they acted around each other, distant yet loving ...

wonderfully done!

outsidersgirl chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
a good one
Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 12/8/2007

i loved i loved ]

hahaha and yes, i do agree with your inability to finish stories :P

and nsw. is. so. much. cooler. than. sa.


just to let you know :p
LilsurferSango17 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
I have mixed feelinga about this. Overall I loved it but I think the ending could have been better.

As one-parters go, it was amazing. I'm interested in looking in to some of your other works, even though this is completely different from some of the others.
Vineta chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
This was wonderful, as everything you write is. I really enjoyed it, and I love Mac's character. I am looking forward a new chapter on your other story though! Good job!
XxFallenxX chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
'I was incandescent with rage!' I can just imagine her hair rising upwards and flames flaring up behind her. And you know... this doesn't have to be one-shot...
A DreamWriter chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Laugh my ass off, I love the random guy that's all "Cover up your boy bits!"
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