Reviews for Decision Time, Peanut
Shnee chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I really like this one-shot, and although we already know what will happen in the end I can't help wanting to read about all the happenings previous to this scene; their first meeting, the birthday, would make a good short story ;) hint hint!
CaRiNeSs chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Wow... I feel really bad for the brother seeing as it was his birthday but what can ya do? Loved it though :) She made the right choice! Poor Davey :(
Midnight113 chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
I really enjoyed reading that. The tension and drama of the situation was captured perfectly actually and a somewhat happy ending too. Very well written, nice job!
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
I quite liked it. Tension, drama, romance, and a full storyline that some oneshots tend to lack...all in all, excellent job. Very well written too. )
lizlively chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
this one shot was fact, you should make it into a novel length story ;) its that good!
Alanisaur chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Pretty good. I think you should make a one-shot about Davey.

Anara Celebvilya chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
That was really very good. It was kind of weird at the end where it was happy AND sad. It's really strange how that can happen.

So, yeah... It was really good. Thanks for a great read!
asianinvasion0530 chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
Realistic and bittersweet and so well-developed. Totally loved it. ]
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
This is so sad... but happy... awesome. :)
KarmaC chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Really interesting. I liked the interactions between Mac and Evie (I love her name by the way!). Lovely.
Jodzter chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I LOVED this story!

AdiGal chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I hate you for doing that to Davey. My empathy for Davey overpowers my happiness for Mac and Evie.

But, I love you for writing this one-shot so well. The emotions are portrayed amazingly, you're characterization is really good too.

Well done!

Dwindling Fire chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
naw i feel so sorry for Davey :( awesome though.
righthere431 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I love this story!
soon2Bme chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
I love this story. I have read it now at least twice (at totally forgot to review :( But I'm making up for it!) I like the whole peanut thing...very funny, but something I honestly could see someone doing. I also think you truly caught the emotions that would be rolling through someone in a situation similiar to the one mentioned here. Keep up the great work. And by the way (not trying to sound I gotta say I love your choice in football teams!
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