|Reviews for porcelain baby, not plastic|
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
it's interesting. i think the last line was different from what i was expecting. but i agree with your summary. fake is not cool. and suicide seems to be in...interesting piece. nice work. keep writing. )
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
k umm.. Well it seemed good until the last lines. You're basically telling people to go die, not very good. But I do think that you write well. I know what you mean about not liking fake people, but at the same time you must remember that I life is a life and once lost can not be replaced.