|Reviews for Mirror Mirror you don't see me|
| LetItAllOut chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
this is such a deep and engaging piece! you can really feel the emotion flowing from every word and into you as you read it.
you really have a talent ash
| Billie.Joelle chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
oh. i love it. so, emotional. very nice. my favorite lines: "she is all you see/you don't see me." perfect ending. very nice.
| onlyuptosaveit chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I do like this one quite a bit. The pain is evident and clearly felt by the reader. Sticks in my mind too. I'll have this stuck in my head for a few days, I should think.
| My Violent Love chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Don't do it.
You promised me you wouldn't.
Nothing I can say will stop you.
Does it help?
Do you like seeing them?
The pretty patterns?
I know it makes you feel better.
I know from experience.
But a friend of mine told me to be strong.
Don't think that friend of mine gives a sh*t what i say anymore.
But that friend means a lot to me.
And I don't want to lose her over a boy.
That girl gave me so many memories.
I need that girl...
And there's my rant to ur rant.
| HollowxPromises chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I am now going to cyberhug you. *cyberhug*
Sorry that just felt appropriate.
I really do hope that vent helped...
Sounds like a lot of shit is gathering in your life.
I hear fire gets rid of shit. Anyone got a flamethrower?
It was beautiful and I could understand it don't worry.
I shall be at the other end of the world on my computer, ready to review your rants ]
Yes, I'm oh so slightly hyper.
I don't get how but still-I just woke up...I've had no sugar...