Reviews for Crumpled Cars
Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
This reminds me of all the action/adventure movies I've ever watched. Cool. Dancing flames.
Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Dancing is a very apt word. After all flames are beautiful even whilst deadly.
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I've never seen a haiku about a car crash, so you get kudos for that. Also, this is very well written. Great work.

Peace, Daze
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I really like the ending. Very creative. The imagery is really clear too. Well done.