|Reviews for awaiting the day that he'd finally|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
love the format.. such a sad story.. beautifully told.. I really love the second to last stanza
| the face in the window chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
| half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
If my brain wasn't mush, I'd give more substance than that. But I loved it.
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
amazing. it's so sad and the emotion is just so real. wonderful job.
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Very sad. I have to say it again, I know it's your style but for me it's distracting, all the parenthesis. Other then that I thought it was good. S.S.
| Nighthawk Nuke chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
That has got to be the most depressing thing I have ever read...