Reviews for awaiting the day that he'd finally
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
love the format.. such a sad story.. beautifully told.. I really love the second to last stanza
the face in the window chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
That's beautiful.

half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
konban wa

Heartbreaking. :(

If my brain wasn't mush, I'd give more substance than that. But I loved it.


Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
amazing. it's so sad and the emotion is just so real. wonderful job.

shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Very sad. I have to say it again, I know it's your style but for me it's distracting, all the parenthesis. Other then that I thought it was good. ~S.S.
Nighthawk Nuke chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
That has got to be the most depressing thing I have ever read...