Reviews for Talk with me, not to me
felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
I like how the title ties it all together. No one really likes being talked at.

"And their hearts smile in their conversation." Great ending, truly. Simple truths represented as sweet poems. Go you.

Felicia.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
I like this a lot.. the title is great and its true we often reveal more than we intend and I like how you talk about how that can be good (bc usually we focus on how it can be bad)... and I love the last line
Fan Fan chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I love the underlying meanings so well floating above the beautiful rhyming. Thank you for yet another work that brings me one more smile of the day :)
lordelfy chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Aww the last line is so cute and makes this piece have something really positive and it made me smile! I love it! Great job!