Reviews for when i grow old
SEMMU chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
I very much enjoyed this one. I can't wait until I'm old enough to disregard my prescribed responsibilities. Awesome! I particularly enjoyed "I shall let my socks fall down". I very much enjoyed the image of myself as an old man doing whatever, whenever.
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
Why wait? The meter was excellent...
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
Interesting poem. Cool. :) Well done. Write on!

Anna _
Shadepray chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Reminds me of carnal insticts and playful childishness all rolled into one...I like it good work

shade