Reviews for little boy
Incognito Arbiter chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
All this poem is about is just words that absolutely mean nothing. There is nothing that proves the darkness or "sadness", essentially, the majority of the poem is ostentatious ornamentation.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
very sweet.. beautiful imagery.. I love the part about the lips and the world being in colors... and the part about the moon and cloud.. wonderful job