|Reviews for Ahh Coffee|
| generically beautiful chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
It's a great poem - trust me, I can relate - but it isn't a haiku. Just switch categories, and you'll be just fine.
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Lol. Good. I can't say i'm a cofee fan myself. I'll stick with hot chocolate.
Anyway, as i said, good poem, but possbily not a haiku.
Traditional haiku's are three lines with the syllable pattern 5, 7, 5.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
:) Well described. Why is the category haiku, btw? :P Well done. Write on!