Reviews for your hands and a full sky
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i think you start and end your stanzas at odd places, but godo descriptions.

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Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
This is gorgeous. Tender and tactile, it speaks so succinctly with the way that it was constructed. A wonderful, favorited read. Great write. MD:77.
BelovedOfAslan chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
The imagery of hands as birds, and holding hands, is all very surprising and unusual in a quiet, subdued way. Very, very good.
on the line chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Ooh, so pretty. I really like the bird image.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
I like this a lot... it flows well and the bird metaaphor is awesome