i think you start and end your stanzas at odd places, but godo descriptions.

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This is gorgeous. Tender and tactile, it speaks so succinctly with the way that it was constructed. A wonderful, favorited read. Great write. MD:77.

The imagery of hands as birds, and holding hands, is all very surprising and unusual in a quiet, subdued way. Very, very good.

Ooh, so pretty. I really like the bird image.

I like this a lot... it flows well and the bird metaaphor is awesome