|Reviews for optimism|
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
I've come back to this several times and re-read it. I have to ask. Is polorised a typo? Polarised perhaps?
Otherwise i think it is a very astute haiku.
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
I like this. Very creative and refreshingly new since I haven't read anything quite like this on fictionpress. The only problem is that the last line is only 4 syllables. Well written, well done.
| Prieda Solo chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
wow. I actually love this. I will probably think about it all day.
That is so good. powerful whatsname on commercialisation :) And the title is so nice and so ironic all at the same time.
There is so much you can read into this. And that is a sign of Great Literature (heh).