Reviews for My Personal Love Z
Sing With The Elevator Music chapter 13 . 2/3/2008
these people are seriously acident magnets. poor chris and chloe. i feel really sad for them. its just not fair! i like how its still unpredictable. i never really saw Chris's accident coming, though i shouldve now that i think about it. but i was too busy thinking about the kiss and all the repercusions i guess. oh and their kiss wasnt bad. i LOVED it. it was cute the whole song and everything. lol

cant wait for more i'd really like to see how Amanda takes everything. cuz thats hard for her. she cant be all peaches and cream about it (even though i think what she did was awful) i still see how this will be a difficult emotion for Amanda. she prolly wont be able to trust Chloe anymore...

EpicDreamer chapter 13 . 2/3/2008
Ooh, yey! An update!

Chris! Noo! What happened?

I hope everything turns out alright...

And, tnx for reviewing my story.

makes a face

Yeah, Jen is a nickname. Jane seems longer to me. shrugs

And no, you're updating is still quite fast to me.

I've been waiting on some stories that have not updated for months! Oh well.

I'll be waiting for the next one.

Alabrith Ironflame chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
After waiting so long -hahah jk jk jk-but seriously...

Lol, I loved it-but i hate how u always leave me hanging! Ah, the classic love...well in ur case 'Z'. So interesting I really wish i hadnt read all your chapters so quickly-then i'd be able to suffer less as I wait for your next chap to come up

I did catch some mistakes-but they are so fricken petty that they dont even matter or disrupt the story in any way.

Continue with your writing! I love the style!

love-everlasting chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
Oh no :[ How sad... I really hope he survives..
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
don't tell me that chris is in the hospital...that would be sad...i just hope that he would be alright...i wonder what chole going to do now likes chole...i like it...can't wait for the next chapter to update...bye..bye...
Pixilated chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
HOLY CRAP! This is such an amazing story, please update soon, I really can't wait.
Kiea Evergreen chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
Yay! Chloe got her first kiss! Oh no poor Chris. Just when things start to go right and start to straighten out, something has to happen. This is not going to end well. Great chapter and keep up the good work. Write you later! ;)
Hopelessly Clueless chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
Aw yay, i used the right off! But more about the chapter! It was Michelle, and I thought it was Amanda! What happened to Chris! He CANNOT DIE! Update! :D
Aury03395 chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
HEHEHE! I hope you didn't mind when I put your story on my blog. Anyways, again, I loved this story. Wow, there's never a time where you won't surprise me. I hope Chris or should I say Christopher will be okay. Thanks for updating! :-D

Alabrith Ironflame chapter 12 . 1/21/2008
Haha wow the singing of the song makes Chris fall into kissing Chloe haha that was unique. Gosh write more lol! haha no-i give you time since camp just got out lol

But seriously...I love it...hahah sry i didnt read it earlier!

I was too busy reading and enjoying the story to hammer you on the nitty gritty details thats not ma job lol

More! More! lol
Alabrith Ironflame chapter 11 . 1/21/2008
The swooning made me crack up! When Chris and Chloe were together... I half expecte dhim to give her a jacket or try to hold her and she'd be like 'thats great' and then it'd be like major drama...glad it wasnt too cliche there-as far as many other stories i've read lol

Good job!

Time for the last chapter till you update!
Alabrith Ironflame chapter 10 . 1/21/2008
Haha i just realized Calypso had already commented on the John neways...

This chapter was great-especially the end lol

I love Chris-reminds me of this one guy-almost perfectly alike As for Chloe she still reminds me of Violet lol

YAy 11!
Alabrith Ironflame chapter 9 . 1/21/2008
It was good-I think that John needs to be a bit more characterized-although he is a side character. I cant picture a complete picture of him, thats the problem on my end.

Otherwise, very good, loved the ending lines about 'chloe leaving her lies' and all.

Good! Wow I've read a lot tonight lol

to 10!
Alabrith Ironflame chapter 8 . 1/21/2008
Amanda and Chloe have some issues-lies with Chloe and Amanda dating a few guys...hmm
Alabrith Ironflame chapter 7 . 1/21/2008
OMG! the second I saw McGyver I thought of Kiea! HAHAHA I love McGyver and Reba cuz of her lol-well great so far

Next! LOL
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