Reviews for aftermath
Buddy Chandler chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Amazing how an ordinary day, pretty much like we have all had, becomes so much more important and noteworthy because very casually elegant words remind us to pay attention to and feel

even the smallest sensations...hm
black.pain chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
sorry this took so long but i really like it. like the long lines and the clear stanzas. Thanks, black
iloveanimecartoons chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
I hate to be so simplistic but I can only think of one word for now: WOW.

I'm at a loss for anything better to say. And that's about the best compliment I can give any writer because I usually write the way I talk (and I tend to ramble...yeah...).

I'll just say that the style with which you write is the type that keeps me interested till the end. So many theories popped through my head as I read this as to what happened to the character of the poem to create such emotion. It was like reading a movie. Hm, hope that made sense. Anyway, I really enjoyed it. New fav!

Hm...looking back, I guess I DID have more to say than WOW, huh? Heh heh heh...go fig!
Alphabetical Dreams chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
wow, darling, that's amazing. I love the last stanza, its image is so clear, i could see everything.

lovely

Creating a Dream