Reviews for The Descent
thewrinkleintime chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
It took me a while, but I finally have time to read your writing! I can completely relate to feeling like you're not ready to get older and having gone through too much too fast. Growing up too fast sucks :(
darke-faerie chapter 12 . 8/8/2011
I really enjoyed how this journal was written & how open it is & I can't wait to read your other journals
marceline the vampire queen chapter 12 . 4/8/2011
You know, I love your writing style. I really do. Your journals are kind of relatable in a way, and you really get the emotions through - I'm so sorry for everything that's happened to you and I hope you're recovering now. Maybe you should consider submitting these for publication, although you'd probably feel uneasy making this part of yourself so publicly known.

Anyway, I thought this was kind of...well, I guess beautiful's not the right word, but definitely moving. I especially liked the lines "I'm squished on the bus between two people I guess you'd call friends," and "I try to pretend there's no correlation between catching a door before it closes and losing more weight that nobody wants me to lose."

I'm heading off to read your other journals now.
MusicKillsThePain chapter 10 . 11/9/2010
i really love reading your journals.
AngelOfTheSouthWest chapter 3 . 6/17/2008
This is really sad. I hope that you feel better now ot that you're at least starting to. It's been written well though. I'll carry on reading to the end.

Steff x
UtterWeirdo chapter 12 . 6/5/2008
Fascinating, saddening and terrifying by turns. Update soon!
Broken For You chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Somehow, I managed to miss this journal. I'm keeping up with the other ones though. But I just wanted to say that my old high school is doing Fiddler On The Roof this year, and my sister's in it. She just has a small part in the chorus, but it's still pretty exciting. Anyway, just wanted to add that random note in there.
Bri-Cathleen chapter 7 . 12/16/2007
this is

well, i dont want to say sad

but i guess it kinda is
Frore chapter 2 . 12/13/2007
Wow. Great and emotional. You can see how your writing style and ability grows with each entry. Reminds me a lot of how I was when I was 15. ( Keep writing!