|Reviews for Crossing the Line|
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/8/2015
hey i read all of the parts branded and crossing the line i love it so so much why did you not finish i am so upset you have a lot of sarcasm in the fics i know its been 7 years since then but please please finish the story please
| Alice chapter 10 . 4/30/2015
god i m really fed up of reading half stories ... why can't u guys at least complete the story before leaving... no offense but u can't leave the story at suspense... it kind of suck... also because... alex is trapped between two guys... i want to know with whom she ends... UPDATE SOON... it's been 7 yrs...
| ajashire1 chapter 3 . 7/27/2014
I read some reviews for your story and... now I just can't finish it. I like this story to much to go on reading it knowing there won't be an ending. It was a fun ride and to me this story will just have to be the one that got away...
| Lauren Stargazer chapter 10 . 12/21/2013
First off, I want to say that all the stories in this series of yours have been really interesting! Ever since I stumbled upon the first story, I've been spending my free time reading everything up to this point. I'm not a huge fan of love triangles, either, but that didn't stop me from reading. I do like Zane more as a love interest more, though, so I'm glad the love triangle thing is over.
Secondly, I have mixed feelings about Crossing the Line. I've enjoy it completely, but the last time you updated was over five years ago and you left your readers hanging in a horrible spot. It's hard to pick up a project after that long and your writing style and tastes will probably be different. Still, there's a little part of me that is holding out that you'll take a break from your non-fictionpress projects and give us some kind of closure (and another part of me just wants to read your non-fictionpress projects).
Let's face it, you've been on a fictionpress hiatus. Maybe this is permanent. I shouldn't get my hopes up too much. Do you even read these reviews?
I hope that whatever you are doing, you keep up the great work!
| The Undecisive Thinker chapter 10 . 8/22/2013
I can't believe you ended it there...
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US?!
| The Undecisive Thinker chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
So I don't know if I should even bother starting this seeing as you won't finish it...but I guess I'll take what I can get
| Lauren chapter 10 . 4/12/2013
I'm really sad that you stopped writing these. I know it's been five years, and it's probably tough to get back into a story after so long; but if you ever get to a point where you feel like writing more, I'm sure I'm not the only one who would be thrilled.
| lilmissrainbow10 chapter 10 . 11/29/2011
Hi Stilled Heart! I just read The Vampires Half Moon, Branded and Crossing the Line, and I REALLY loved them. But, um... I really want to know the rest of the story, cause it's not finished yet is it?
I love your characters so much! Although I do think that Ty and Alex should be together, and Natalie and Zane should be together (I mean, she's waited long enough right?). I have a feeling that you're going to make Ty and Natalie be together. The baby werewolves sound soooo cute! I want to play with one!
Well, I hope you update soon,
| BebeEllis chapter 9 . 8/8/2011
i kinda hate and love you right now. HOW CAN U LEAVE IT LIKE THIS? AND AT AN IMPORTANT CHANGE OF PLOT? ARGG THIS IS MOST DEFINETLY A HIATUS! 3years... omg i wanna know what happens so badly . guess ill just have to daydream
| lovelytimes chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I finished branded but I'm very reluctant to continue the tale knowing it isn't complete. I'm already distraught enough without reading the third installment. Haha, well it was really a good read. Awfully cliche I must admit, but entertaining as well as addicting.
| Depressed chapter 10 . 8/19/2010
I am utterly and entirely depressed that you have opted to leave this creation incomplete.
| Australian reader chapter 10 . 7/23/2010
I really like this story. I hope that you are going to finish it. It just stops in the middle and i'm sure here are a lot of people out who would like to know what happens.
| Skylene chapter 9 . 6/30/2010
I hope you don't think i'm being bitchy but where's the rest of the story you CAN NOT leave it hanging like that...
| skylene chapter 10 . 6/14/2010
oh comeon you cannot leave us hanging like that please write more :)
| Skylene chapter 10 . 6/1/2010
OMG...i love your story...you are going to hook them up now aren't you?