Reviews for The Thin Line
Anonymous chapter 20 . 4/19/2015
Ludivine dying is deus ex machina. Not cool. Shows lack of creativity.
Miho chapter 9 . 1/31/2014
So I have a question. More rather I have a few questions. Can these vampires have children? and if they do are the children born as vampires or humans? How does that work with the whole "dead vampire body" thing? Anyway I was just wondering.
Guest chapter 15 . 12/18/2013
You made Marina kinda a slut, blowing all her boyfriends after saying she's never done anything with a boy, and now I find out that not only does he have to turn her asap, but once he does, she can't have children? Man, screw this, I am O-U-T.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/18/2013
You said earlier on in the story she had never done anything with a boy, and now she's given blowjobs to more than one? Come on, man, make up your mind.
jennielove chapter 24 . 6/25/2013
Absolutely amazing story! i loved it soo much. all of the characters are great. i couldn't stop reading it.. keep writing!
heal me forever chapter 23 . 10/23/2012
fuck dis was beautiful tristain was damn damn damn awesum even she ...i even loved d other 2 ...gng to d sequel now :)
leavemeialone chapter 26 . 8/5/2011
This is quite enjoyable. I love seeing the strong connection and love that the two have for each other. Well, I guess I really enjoy seeing Tristian caring so much about her. The way he feels about her and how she makes him so happy is something that I envy and hope to have one day. I am glad that they have gone so much together.
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 3 . 5/11/2011
if you ever edit this and republish it, you probably meant not understand me but are we clear? because otherwise crystal doesnt make sense haha :)
TheLastFireBender chapter 23 . 5/3/2011
Roka-San chapter 23 . 3/23/2011
Ehehe I absolutely loved this. I wasn't expecting to be so consumed by another story, really. I was browsing looking for some inspiration for my own story, but this one really grabbed me. I'm on to the others now.

Amazing work :3
Lifes.Little.Secrets chapter 24 . 2/18/2011
Love love loved it! Can't wait to read the sequal!
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 23 . 2/4/2011
Awe. She's pregnant! Ah! That was so cute.
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 18 . 2/4/2011
Ohemgee. She almost died. Ah! Okay. That was lame.
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 14 . 2/4/2011
Oh my gosh. I just realized that I haven't reviewed yet. This is really interesting. It's going a bit fast though... Well, whatever. :)
too-cool-4-ya chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
This is the first of your stories that I have read and so far I like it. Just wondering though when she says "what do you care?" is it supposed to be what or why? English is not my first language but I wasn't sure. Thought you might want to know. Other than that it's great.
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