Ludivine dying is deus ex machina. Not cool. Shows lack of creativity.

So I have a question. More rather I have a few questions. Can these vampires have children? and if they do are the children born as vampires or humans? How does that work with the whole "dead vampire body" thing? Anyway I was just wondering.

You made Marina kinda a slut, blowing all her boyfriends after saying she's never done anything with a boy, and now I find out that not only does he have to turn her asap, but once he does, she can't have children? Man, screw this, I am O-U-T.

You said earlier on in the story she had never done anything with a boy, and now she's given blowjobs to more than one? Come on, man, make up your mind.

Absolutely amazing story! i loved it soo much. all of the characters are great. i couldn't stop reading it.. keep writing!

fuck dis was beautiful tristain was damn damn damn awesum even she ...i even loved d other 2 ...gng to d sequel now :)

This is quite enjoyable. I love seeing the strong connection and love that the two have for each other. Well, I guess I really enjoy seeing Tristian caring so much about her. The way he feels about her and how she makes him so happy is something that I envy and hope to have one day. I am glad that they have gone so much together.

if you ever edit this and republish it, you probably meant not understand me but are we clear? because otherwise crystal doesnt make sense haha :)

two words: FUCKING AWESOME!

Ehehe I absolutely loved this. I wasn't expecting to be so consumed by another story, really. I was browsing looking for some inspiration for my own story, but this one really grabbed me. I'm on to the others now.

Amazing work :3

Love love loved it! Can't wait to read the sequal!

Awe. She's pregnant! Ah! That was so cute.

Ohemgee. She almost died. Ah! Okay. That was lame.

Oh my gosh. I just realized that I haven't reviewed yet. This is really interesting. It's going a bit fast though... Well, whatever. :)

This is the first of your stories that I have read and so far I like it. Just wondering though when she says "what do you care?" is it supposed to be what or why? English is not my first language but I wasn't sure. Thought you might want to know. Other than that it's great.