Reviews for The Thin Line |
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![]() ![]() ![]() She ran away? Wow, i hope that they find her! LOVED IT! ~Adreyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT 2 PIECES! ~Adreyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! Loved it! ~Adreyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! I loved it! ~Adreyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() They end was so sweet. He is so good her...sort of. I love this story! I'll recommend it to all my friends that visit fiction press because its awesome! ~Adreyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! ~Adreyn! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I LOVED IT! ~adreyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Suck my cock..." LOL! That was really funny! Loved it pieces! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I loved it! It was so amazing. It kinda reminds me of twilight, but its different in a very creative way! This was an EXCELLENT chapter! GOOD JOB! ~Adreyn |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! It's an amazing story. I didn't think you moved too fast it was nice not to long and not to short either. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! i love this story. it was simply amazing. i just dont know what to say. im speechless. this was so good i loved everything about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh. i don't even know what to say! that was such an amazing story! though at times it seemed like you'd forget about what you've already written. but that set aside, this story was through and through satisfying. it had fluff, it had plot, it had sensory issues (not in a bad way, like, the color of their eyes, etc.) it was altogether great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It looks good.. I'll just continue reading this.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the end to this chappie |