Reviews for The Thin Line
LilMaria chapter 10 . 5/18/2008
She ran away? Wow, i hope that they find her!


LilMaria chapter 8 . 5/18/2008

LilMaria chapter 7 . 5/18/2008
Good job! Loved it!

LilMaria chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
Good job! I loved it!

LilMaria chapter 5 . 5/18/2008
They end was so sweet. He is so good her...sort of. I love this story!

I'll recommend it to all my friends that visit fiction press because its awesome!

LilMaria chapter 4 . 5/18/2008

LilMaria chapter 3 . 5/18/2008

LilMaria chapter 2 . 5/18/2008
"Suck my cock..." LOL! That was really funny!

Loved it pieces!
LilMaria chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Wow! I loved it! It was so amazing. It kinda reminds me of twilight, but its different in a very creative way! This was an EXCELLENT chapter!


AMM3485 chapter 23 . 5/17/2008
I loved this story! Great job!
EchoedShadows chapter 23 . 5/17/2008
I love it! It's an amazing story. I didn't think you moved too fast it was nice not to long and not to short either.
jg85 chapter 23 . 5/14/2008
WOW! i love this story. it was simply amazing. i just dont know what to say. im speechless. this was so good i loved everything about it.
VELVETxKISSES chapter 23 . 5/14/2008
oh my gosh. i don't even know what to say! that was such an amazing story! though at times it seemed like you'd forget about what you've already written. but that set aside, this story was through and through satisfying. it had fluff, it had plot, it had sensory issues (not in a bad way, like, the color of their eyes, etc.) it was altogether great!
bignsassy818 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
It looks good.. I'll just continue reading this..
Katherine-the-greate chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
i love the end to this chappie
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