Reviews for The Thin Line
CarnivalGirl346 chapter 19 . 4/1/2008
Well i must say this was a very emotioinal chapter. I did feel bad for Tristan at first, but he did make the wrong choice.I cannot wait until Ludivine gets her ass kicked!
CarnivalGirl346 chapter 18 . 4/1/2008
Steamy! Is it hot on here or is it me? JK! Great chapter. Sorry I'm reviewing so late i have been so busy! Now I have to catch up. Meaning I have to read chapter 19!
Silly-girl15 chapter 19 . 3/30/2008
Super sweet chap. cant wait for the next one. :)
Jennicide chapter 19 . 3/30/2008
What happened to the pictures you had of your characters?
Ck90 chapter 19 . 3/30/2008
Hot headed woman! God! Isn't she the least bit hurt that her sister just wanted money? YEs! Hunt tat Bitch down!
EdwardsWife chapter 19 . 3/30/2008
WOW! I am shocked. I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for an update...so hurry please )
chng234 chapter 19 . 3/30/2008
i got a feeling that ava was sent by Ludivine to distract marina so that Ludivine can catch her when she was alone.

i hope marina will be fine.
OoohLookACat chapter 19 . 3/30/2008
i knew it

you don't just take cats in off the streets

they might have rabies

-shakes head-

he was so trusting.

and that ava

gosh urgh she's gr

can't wait for more

izzie
Elf or Vixen chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
i love this chapter

and this story

YES! kick Ludivine's stupid ass!

keep writing
Hazelnut Romance chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
ludivine so has to go down!
Riley Hunter chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
ek! evil Ludivine! KILL HER! and make marina a vampire :)

- those are my demands :) they can NOT be compromised! but they can take place at ANY time.

Ummz...so ya. PLEASE make that happen?
heartfeltlove chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
I saw that coming!

Awesome chapter!
Kiss The Stars With Me chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
Update really soon!
Broken-token chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
dude i love james!

and please not let her do anything stupid to marina! i want tristan and her to have little bouncing baby monster vamps that suck the insides of tomatoes out thinkin that they look like their daddy LOL beleive it or not that JUST came into my head anyway UPDATE SOON!
kanders chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
omg, please hurry and update!
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