Reviews for The Thin Line
Ck90 chapter 18 . 3/29/2008
Interesting, at first I thught that the fever wa Ludivine messing with Tristans mind. Kind of glad that it wasn't. If he turns her does her scent change? Update Soon!
Nicole Deming chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
Oh she just needs to die already.. Ludivine that is. I really dont like her. I hope Marina is ok. Update soon.
SapphireAngel2900 chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
lol, "were taking with b!tch down" that made me laugh...Great Chapter!

Chelsea

XOXOXO
mysticthunder chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
Ass kicking? Yes please! The bit with Ava was unlikely, but i suppose it did open a door to let Marina get mad. Great job as usual, can't wait for more!
Diamandis chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
I HATE Ludivine SO much, well of course I do lol. Can't wait for her to get her ass kicked! It should be fun to read. NOO, I don't want it to end. I hope you do a sequel *wink wink* lo'. UPDATE SOON!
Rachetto chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
whoa,

intense or what?

Marina's sister is such a bitch!

Wow. She's better off without her.

but it was funny when james said..

“We’re taking this bitch down.”

lmao..

update soon!

x
Cynically In Love chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
Oh shit! (Excuse my language!) Ludivine better get her ass kicked good! She's such a bitch! OHMYGOD! YO UNEED TO UPDATE! I'M JUMPING UP AND DOWN RIGHT NOW WITH ANTICIPATION! AH! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...UPDATE SOON! SOON, ALRIGHT! SOON! AWESOME CHAPTER, BY THE WAY! LOVED IT!
sara1965 chapter 19 . 3/29/2008
Yep i would be scarred Jamed Tristan and am axe not a very good combination lol. I really wanna know what happens next your chapters are geting better ny the second so pleased UPDATE SOON
LSnyd chapter 18 . 3/28/2008
This chapter was so cute. keep up the good work. UD soon!
Elf or Vixen chapter 18 . 3/27/2008
love this story.

it's awsome
Olivia C chapter 18 . 3/27/2008
Love this story
OoohLookACat chapter 18 . 3/27/2008
well to say things are heating up is an understatement

it's like a freakin sauna

haha can't wait for more

izzie
Hazelnut Romance chapter 18 . 3/27/2008
that bi*! by the end of this story, i hope she dies. she so deserves it!
caffineislove chapter 18 . 3/26/2008
this was amazing update again soon!
Kiss The Stars With Me chapter 18 . 3/26/2008
Update really soon!
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