| Reviews for The Thin Line |
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   DeadlyWhisper chapter 16 . 3/19/2008 Good work so far. Excited about Marina finally getting turned even if it isn't fully. I'm going to assume it won't easy though. Maybe Ludivine will steal Marina while she's transforming...that would be cool :D |
| Riley Hunter chapter 16 . 3/18/2008 GOD CHAPIE! |
| sara1965 chapter 16 . 3/18/2008 aw what an AWESOME you FRICKEN ROCK lol i really liked but that was a too god of a cliffy i gott know what hapens next! UPDATE SON |
| Diamandis chapter 16 . 3/18/2008 Yet another amazing chapter. I am never dissapointed. I hope Marina survives being partially changed, I think she will. There would be no 'The Thin Line' without her. I'm glad there was another choice, I wanted her to be a vampire AND have children and now she can be sort of half-vampire and have children, thats good enough for me lol. Update ASAP! |
| Estelin chapter 16 . 3/18/2008 This story is excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more of the story to come. |
| Hazelnut Romance chapter 16 . 3/17/2008 marina's real brave. i hope she turns out ok! update :] |
| OoohLookACat chapter 16 . 3/17/2008 ooh that's an interesting twist can't wait for more izzie |
| chng234 chapter 1 . 3/17/2008 I like this chapter a lot. Tristen is always so sweet to marina, always asking her for her opinion. I believe the partial change will be a success. pls update soon |
| LSnyd chapter 16 . 3/17/2008 I love this story so much. Great job. UD soon! |
| heartfeltlove chapter 16 . 3/17/2008 I loved this chapter, but then you metioned kids and I was like "eh... ew" Pediophobia Is what I have I guess...Lol Anyways, Awesome chapter! |
| Ck90 chapter 15 . 3/16/2008 Hmm and here I thought that they could have children as vampires. But for them to have children it means that they have to turn them as well, and grow older? Hm. Anyway great update! How come Ace was killed faster than Ludivine? Was he younger? Update Soon! |
| CarnivalGirl346 chapter 15 . 3/13/2008 OK so i finally decided to read this story. Riley Hunter (so not her real name) my friend told me this was god so i read it and... I'm happy to announce...that...I will be...sticking around to read the next chapter. I love your story. I hate Ludivine. SO UPDATE SOON! |
| ItalianQT chapter 15 . 3/11/2008 Marina better start her lessons right away! Update soon! :-) |
| Stahlut chapter 15 . 3/11/2008 I loved it, it put it all into a nice level of drama, and I cannot wait to read more. |
| Rachetto chapter 15 . 3/11/2008 fp didn't send me notification of the new chap :( Thank goodness I found it. I'm gna guess that Marina won't agree to be turned until she has a kid with Tristan? update soon. |