Reviews for The Thin Line
Hazelnut Romance chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
yay! ace is dead. one done, on eot go. update soon!
people.are.strange chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
I love how this story is updated frequently, it keeps me interested. I really hope the preoccupo works because I would love to see Tristan and Chrisina have kids.
OoohLookACat chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
urgh that evil bitch

i'm outraged

she ...oh if she were real

(i would probably run but thats besides the point)

can't wait for more

poor tristan

life has to suck right now...well mostly

izzie
heartfeltlove chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
Awesome chapter!

Ludivine...She is just so darn mean!

Please kill her.

(Harsh much?)

Anyways marina got mad at tristan because he implyed she was a golddigger?

Also I don't like the thought of marina and tristan having kids... maybe its because I don't like kids myself?

So like I said Awesome chapter!

Update soon!
atreyu love chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
i want them to have a child together! :)

PLEASE UPDATE!
Riley Hunter chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
oh. excellent chappie! Do update soon...
Diamandis chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
I want Tristan to turn her but I want them to have children! Oh my gosh, how quick was this update? Your amazing lol. Update ASAP!
sara1965 2 lazy 2 login chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
yes another awesom chapter i really liked it Update Soon

UPDATE SON
Lj chapter 15 . 3/10/2008
i'm so looking forward to reading bout tristan ripping Ludivine's head off!(hate that witch)

honestly what would he do without chrisina. i think she should also teach marina to give Ludivine nightmares! is that possible? that would be SO much fun!
people.are.strange chapter 14 . 3/9/2008
Great, great chapter. It was just so lovey dovey and stuff, made me like it very much.
Stahlut chapter 14 . 3/9/2008
that was really cool. I really like this story so much.
Ck90 chapter 14 . 3/9/2008
Gah I really hope that Ludivine gets chopped off into tiny pieces! Seriously! Wow! Stupid school! Seriously she was enticing? Gawd what a pathetic excuse for a guy! When will they be truly bonded? Update Soon!
DeadlyWhisper chapter 14 . 3/9/2008
Gr8 update! Just one thing shouldn't the bit where u typed 'flipped him, so she was beneath him' be he was beneath her?
Riley Hunter chapter 14 . 3/9/2008
aw. cute-ness~!
heartcoregirl chapter 14 . 3/9/2008
This story is so brilliant and so well written! I wish I was as good. I can't wait for your next update!
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