Reviews for The Thin Line
m a d a l l i o n chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
great!
Stahlut chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
I loved this chapter, and I have to say that that guy is a jerk, seriously. anyway great chapter, cannot wait to read more.
Moonlit Promise chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
I liked it but it went pretty fast with no explanations. But i'll keep reading because I like your idea. : ] In fact, my story is just about to get to the point where he- Well, Nevermind. If you wanna read it then you'll figure it out. Rofl. Sorry, I'm really random and hyper because I've had tons of pop and no sleep. Anyway, I'll keep reading. Probably not today though... Yeah, probably... Rofl. Sorry again for my freakishness. : ]
LSnyd chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
Great job. Ud soon!
Ck90 chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
You know Liduvine is slightly cracked. Who am I kidding? SHe belongs in the nuttiest of nutthouses! How WILL Tristan Shoe up during the day? Was that the boy that she randomly kissed on the street? WEll he discustas me! Update Soon! And I hope that you manage your stress!
Rachetto chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
aww,

i only realised that I hadn't reviewed the last chapter,

and now I've done both :)

Tristan won't be a happy bunny non?

He'll be hell bent on getting to the school if the teach says that there's something with Marina haha,

update soon hun,

whenever you feel like it. hope you're alright.

x
Rachetto chapter 12 . 3/6/2008
Haha,

very seductive chapter indeed. :D

And i'm so chuffed that she's admitted that she loves him..
Diamandis chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
Oh yes! Go Marina lol. I hate Chase so much, I know he's only been in one chapter but I can't believe he kissed her (or tried), he knew her for one day, ew. Make him die please :) lol, I'm only joking, just make him get hurt...badly :P. But why did you have to call him Chase! I used to love that now but now I hate it lol. Oh, nevermind. Amazing chapter, as always, update asap!
Momiji K. Sohma chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
Update fastter. T_T -Whines and pouts- I need moorree.
sara1965 chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
HAHAHAHA chase is going to get his ass kicked by one angry vampire hahaha lmfao The next chapter is definently gonna bee intresting!

UPDATE SON OLZ I REALLY WANNA KNOW NOW !
DeadlyWhisper chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
Well done on capturing the unfairness of school punishment in the last bit. Honestly if tht teacher had been watching the whole thing could they not hv seen Marina obviously didnt want Chase kissing her...teachers r silly. Haha anyway...excusing the ranting...well done great update! Keep it up.
D chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
Haha. I think that Tristan would be really smug about everything.
Lj chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
loved it!

i cant wait to see how tristan will react to this!

its gonna be fun!

Chase is such an ass!...lol
Hazelnut Romance chapter 13 . 3/5/2008
nice tactic! mite try it some time. update!
j.c-chic chapter 13 . 3/5/2008
go Marina! kick his scrawny lil' ass! now he cant have kids :D
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