Reviews for The Thin Line
Ck90 chapter 12 . 3/3/2008
Who knew sancing could be so special to a Vampire? I really liked this chapter, it gave a clear view of just how much having a mate affects a vampire. you outdo yourself. Is he going to turn her? Now I mean? Well Anyway! UPDATE SOON!
kanders chapter 12 . 3/3/2008
Aww i love tristan and marina ]

hurry and update please!
Diamandis chapter 12 . 3/3/2008
I agree lol, one of the best chapters yet. I wonder why :P. I love this story SO much. It one of the best I'm reading at the moment. Update soon.
j.c-chic chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
yay! lol
Hazelnut Romance chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
nice chapter. wen's marina gonna turn into a vampire? update soon ;]
Thats For My Memory chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
I cannot wait until your next update!

This story is so amazing to me.

Please hurry!
Riley Hunter chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
nice
OoohLookACat chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
seductive chapter indeed

very seductive haha

izzie
edwardxme chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
hi.

thank you so much for updating so fast. awesome. this chapter was pretty cool. however, a lil to happy/sappy. i m glad the next chapter will get back to plot (which i completly love) please update soon...cant wait too long. btw i was hooked to this fanfic because of how strong headed both characters are, how they fight yet love each other. plz bring that back. jealousy would add to the fanfic. Please try to include it (tristan should be jealous not the other way around)I cant wait till next chapter.
Cynically In Love chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
Ah...update soon! That chapter was awesome! I can't wait for the next! Update!
heartfeltlove chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
On With The Plot! LOL

Awesome chapter!
PerfectChaos859 chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
Loved this chapter I can't wait to read what happens next!
Moonlit Novel chapter 12 . 3/2/2008
update soon cause I can't wait till the next chapter
edwardXme chapter 11 . 3/2/2008
hi..

awesome chapter. one of my favs. i love their fluffy moments ]

cant wait till next update.
Ck90 chapter 11 . 3/1/2008
you know i never thought of twilight at all when I read this.I'm glad that they started to get closer. I'm curious as to why they ran away, what did she do? Update Soon!
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