| Reviews for The Thin Line |
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   Pot chapter 11 . 3/1/2008 “I may be a vampire, but I’m still very much a man.” THAT, is from twilight, I swear. xD Nice story |
| bam chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 wo. they're getting it on. hahaha. Good chapter. You have a perfect balance of light-heartedness, plot, humor, and passion. :] kudos. |
| abc chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 great story! |
| j.c-chic chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 ooh so does marina have thought powers? sweet! |
| Hazelnut Romance chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 now i think of it, it is kinda like twilight but with ur own twist. i still like it. update soon! |
| Stahlut chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 that was awesome, and a fast update, which made me happy. So anyway I really liked that chapter, and cannot wait to read more. |
| HazeleyedHoney chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 Swwet! Lol Tristan is so evil! How he could bring her to the brink and then force her to comply to his wishes or he wouldn't finish the job. She would have agreed to anything at that point. lol Like I said, evil! Great chappy. Hope you update soon, HazeleyedHoney |
| Riley Hunter chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 How in the world is this like Twilight? Marina isn't always talking about how wonderful Tristan is, nor is he trying to fit in with society and pretend to not be a vampire, nor is he lying to her about ANYTHING. so not like Twilight! anyways, good chappie! |
| OoohLookACat chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 definitely not controlling very sweet and smart if that's the punishment lol that's enough incentive for me not to leave hahaha can't wait for more izzie |
| heartfeltlove chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 Awesome chapter! You are kinda close to twilight but you are totally diffrent... does that even make sense? Is marina going to school? |
| Diamandis chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 Quick update I love you! lol. I think every vampire romance story is going to be the same and different to Twilight. I mean it is THE vampire romance book :P Such an amazing chapter, probably my fave so far, I'm a sucker for romance. Omg! Our Summer has been updated. Have I told you that I love you? lmao. Update whenever you can. |
| Rachetto chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 haha, i'm glad marina's ok.. bless her, aww. update soon. x |
| Lj chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 that was hot! i wonder what scared Ludivine and Ace off so much that they didnt even bite marina? guess i'll just have to wait n read. |
| Bitterly.Me chapter 11 . 2/29/2008 That line, where Tristan says, "I may be a vampire, but I’m still very much a man." is SO Twilight. i don't think you MEANT to do that, so its OK. I like where the story is going so far, please continue soon! much luv, -grl4peace :D |
| ItalianQT chapter 10 . 2/28/2008 Uh oh.. Marina got herself into some trouble! Update soon! :-) |