Reviews for The Thin Line |
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![]() ![]() ![]() rajrksldf i can imagine marina so well ): soo pretty and i love the plotline and rahrelfkj and how you explained half vampires rajklfj AMAZING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and can't wait to read the sequel! It was a very good plot line and when I HAD to sleep, I was really disappointed that I couldn't keep myself awake long enough to finish reading it, but I have! |
![]() ![]() cool story, so far... |
![]() ![]() I would do almost anything to switch lives with this chick! I mean holy shit this guy is hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hay did you name the champters from song names/ BTW GREAT STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I so lovd every minuet of this story. Thanks for sharing it with us :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good so far :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS STORY! I'm absolutely addicted. I've been reading it and I'm in love! Sorry for not reviewing each chapet, I just kept clicking to read the next chapter. I thought I'd go back and leave a review showing my apprecitation. (: I love this story, and I love how you keep it going, showing the lives of their offspring. I finished Cross the Line, right? And I'm reading Break the line, right? PLEASE RIGHT MORE! I love that you threw a wrench in the story, how a half breed boy is born. D His mate is so unlikely and so... so amazing! (: I love Ava and Masen's relationship! D -x- Padmai -Hidden Assassin- Your newest devoted reader. (: |
![]() ![]() I checked the pics on your profile and I think Tristan and Braden look so hot. I would so bite that! (i know that was cheesy) *pittsteeler* |
![]() ![]() Braden's funny. I liked him in this chapter! *pittsteeler* |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's so stupid. Never have I ever been so frustrated with a character before! GAH! What the hell? And does she realize her mistake? "I knew you'd come and save me." Where did that confidence come from! What if he hadn't heard her? What if he didn't come? She needs to be more careful. -_- Sorry, I'm not-well, trying to flame ya, if it seems like it, I'm just a bit frustrated. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH-MI-GOD. this story is AMAZINGLY AWESOMELY INSANILY GOODLY GREAT! |
![]() ![]() first chapter, VERY GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, wait, wait. How could Braden blush? Isn't he, like, bloddless? Hmm... This is the question of life... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ludivine's a beeyatch. .-. If I were Marina, I would... Run away. Yus. I'd be all 'HAYELL NO.' And then run. .-. |