Reviews for The Thin Line
honey splattered brains chapter 24 . 6/25/2010
rajrksldf i can imagine marina so well ): soo pretty and i love the plotline and rahrelfkj and how you explained half vampires rajklfj AMAZING.
JoeyAnna chapter 23 . 6/23/2010
I love this story and can't wait to read the sequel! It was a very good plot line and when I HAD to sleep, I was really disappointed that I couldn't keep myself awake long enough to finish reading it, but I have!
sumone chapter 12 . 5/12/2010
cool story, so far...
Taylor chapter 14 . 5/3/2010
I would do almost anything to switch lives with this chick!

I mean holy shit this guy is hot!
Your.Random.Enemy chapter 3 . 4/16/2010
hay did you name the champters from song names/

English Lassie chapter 25 . 3/31/2010
I so lovd every minuet of this story. Thanks for sharing it with us :)
sooner or later its over chapter 3 . 3/21/2010
very good so far :)
Writing Reality chapter 1 . 2/28/2010


I'm absolutely addicted.

I've been reading it and I'm in love!

Sorry for not reviewing each chapet, I just kept clicking to read the next chapter. I thought I'd go back and leave a review showing my apprecitation. (:

I love this story, and I love how you keep it going, showing the lives of their offspring.

I finished Cross the Line, right? And I'm reading Break the line, right?


I love that you threw a wrench in the story, how a half breed boy is born. D

His mate is so unlikely and so... so amazing! (:

I love Ava and Masen's relationship! D


Padmai -Hidden Assassin-

Your newest devoted reader. (:
pittsteelerfrom fanfic chapter 23 . 2/14/2010
I checked the pics on your profile and I think Tristan and Braden look so hot. I would so bite that! (i know that was cheesy)

pittsteelerfrom fanfic chapter 3 . 2/14/2010
Braden's funny. I liked him in this chapter!

GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees chapter 5 . 2/4/2010
She's so stupid. Never have I ever been so frustrated with a character before! GAH! What the hell? And does she realize her mistake? "I knew you'd come and save me." Where did that confidence come from! What if he hadn't heard her? What if he didn't come? She needs to be more careful. -_- Sorry, I'm not-well, trying to flame ya, if it seems like it, I'm just a bit frustrated. xD
Ghost n' Ghoul Girl chapter 23 . 1/27/2010
Ghost n' Ghoul Girl chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
first chapter, VERY GOOD
jazzstfu chapter 7 . 1/12/2010
Wait, wait, wait.

How could Braden blush?

Isn't he, like, bloddless?


This is the question of life...
jazzstfu chapter 6 . 1/12/2010
Ludivine's a beeyatch.


If I were Marina, I would...

Run away.

Yus. I'd be all 'HAYELL NO.' And then run. .-.
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