I really like reading your story and I think it's really fun to read, but I have to say it kind of bugs me how much this is like Stephenie Meyer's Twilight. Some parts are sort of exactly like it. Sorry.

It is just so great, and I cannot wait to read more. I am in wait of what is about to happen.

Evil! So James is Chrissinas father? And Mila is his mate? Marina is quiet impulsive! Poor tristan he sounds like he is about to cry! Update Soon! !

aww,

poor Marina..

both of them are so hot headed I suppose it was unevitable that they would argue.

I hope he finds her soon :(

update soon.

x

Aw, that chapter was quite sad. I can't believe she ran away. He was only protecting her. Can't she see that! You ended it on a major cliffie, I REALLY need to know what happens next. So get writing woman :) lol. Update Soon.

update real soon! i want to see wat happened to marina.

OH NO!

ommg

WHAT DO YOU MEAN if HE'LL FIND HER? he has to find her! n did she run away or did she got lost on her way to should whoop her for scaring him...lol.

update soon!

Aww shucks. They fought.

gasp i am on the edge of my seat

:O

don't you dare be mean and like...hurt her or something!

can't wait for more

insert glare for cliffhanger!

izzie

yay she ran away!

i mean NO! how could she do this? haha. no i definitely mean yay! drama. i LOVE it. and this story. update when possible.

marina did a very stupid thing.

tsk tsk.

lol. PLEASE UPDATE!

i love tristan... did i tell you that? haha.

Oh. my. god.

Seriously, why must you torture me like this?

Update SOON! Please!

-Delilah

That was amazing. Such a cliffy especially with your description at the end. XD I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it coming~. Awesome job.