Reviews for The Thin Line
edwardxme chapter 10 . 2/27/2008
hi.

i love your fanfic. i have been reading since the very start. i cant belive its a cliff hanger. cant wait till the next chapter. please update soon, i cant WAIT! ah...
ConverseKicker16 chapter 10 . 2/27/2008
AH! that was SOO good! i loved it!...UPDATE NOW! yes, this very moment!...GrAwRn!...have a muffin!-Chex
DeadlyWhisper chapter 10 . 2/27/2008
WO! Awesome. Haha i know it's mean but whay Tristan! Lol, he told her to go away and because she's so headstrong she did. Haha. I hope none of them get hurt though. Although I have this horrible feeling that something is going to happen to Ryn's husband and daughter while they're all away.
blondiexoxo chapter 9 . 2/26/2008
i hope u update soon

i love this story

they are an intese couple

love it

hehehehe
Lj chapter 9 . 2/26/2008
great chapter! loved the ending it was hot. cant wait to read more.

update soon!
Jay827 chapter 9 . 2/25/2008
She supposed that she should have felt frightened by this, but strangely enough, she didn’t.

James seemed to have sensed her uneasiness, as did Tristan who tightened his grip on her waist.

“You should not fear us; we, like Ludivine’s little coven here, are here to protect you. We were all mortal once too.” James said

-doesn't make sense if she's not frightened then why do both of them say she is?

-update when possible.
sakura112 chapter 9 . 2/25/2008
aw that was such a cute chappy, hehehe are they gonna ya know? lol

Update son
heartfeltlove chapter 9 . 2/25/2008
I love your story so much!

Its awesome.

but I miss their constant bickering...
Rachetto chapter 9 . 2/25/2008
aww,

I liked this chap.. :)

not stopping for long..

update soon..

tu-rah.

x
Diamandis chapter 9 . 2/25/2008
Fab chapter. This story rocks. Update Soon.
j.c-chic chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
yay! lol
wallaceout chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
I really like this story. It's original and very creative. I also love how protective Tristan is. It's very sexy! Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter! Keep Writing!

wallaceout
OoohLookACat chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
ncie but guarded

good description

i liked it

can't wait for more

izzie
bam chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
loved it. :]

your updates make me happy.
Riley Hunter chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
good job! update when you can
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