Reviews for The Thin Line |
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edwardxme chapter 10 . 2/27/2008 hi. i love your fanfic. i have been reading since the very start. i cant belive its a cliff hanger. cant wait till the next chapter. please update soon, i cant WAIT! ah... |
ConverseKicker16 chapter 10 . 2/27/2008 AH! that was SOO good! i loved it!...UPDATE NOW! yes, this very moment!...GrAwRn!...have a muffin!-Chex |
DeadlyWhisper chapter 10 . 2/27/2008 WO! Awesome. Haha i know it's mean but whay Tristan! Lol, he told her to go away and because she's so headstrong she did. Haha. I hope none of them get hurt though. Although I have this horrible feeling that something is going to happen to Ryn's husband and daughter while they're all away. |
blondiexoxo chapter 9 . 2/26/2008 i hope u update soon i love this story they are an intese couple love it hehehehe |
Lj chapter 9 . 2/26/2008 great chapter! loved the ending it was hot. cant wait to read more. update soon! |
Jay827 chapter 9 . 2/25/2008 She supposed that she should have felt frightened by this, but strangely enough, she didn’t. James seemed to have sensed her uneasiness, as did Tristan who tightened his grip on her waist. “You should not fear us; we, like Ludivine’s little coven here, are here to protect you. We were all mortal once too.” James said -doesn't make sense if she's not frightened then why do both of them say she is? -update when possible. |
sakura112 chapter 9 . 2/25/2008 aw that was such a cute chappy, hehehe are they gonna ya know? lol Update son |
heartfeltlove chapter 9 . 2/25/2008 I love your story so much! Its awesome. but I miss their constant bickering... |
Rachetto chapter 9 . 2/25/2008 aww, I liked this chap.. :) not stopping for long.. update soon.. tu-rah. x |
Diamandis chapter 9 . 2/25/2008 Fab chapter. This story rocks. Update Soon. |
j.c-chic chapter 9 . 2/24/2008 yay! lol |
wallaceout chapter 9 . 2/24/2008 I really like this story. It's original and very creative. I also love how protective Tristan is. It's very sexy! Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter! Keep Writing! wallaceout |
OoohLookACat chapter 9 . 2/24/2008 ncie but guarded good description i liked it can't wait for more izzie |
bam chapter 9 . 2/24/2008 loved it. :] your updates make me happy. |
Riley Hunter chapter 9 . 2/24/2008 good job! update when you can |