Reviews for The Thin Line
Riley Hunter chapter 8 . 2/14/2008
It's okay! But, the plot bunnies have moved on to deserting me...EVIL BUNIES! anyways. update as soon as you can :)
jj chapter 8 . 2/13/2008
parts of this really remind me of the book twilight, but at the same time they are NOTHING alike. Update soon please. this is really good.
Alice Heist chapter 8 . 2/13/2008
So, is she changed now? That was just a little ambiguous.
cherrystraw chapter 8 . 2/13/2008
good story!

i can't wait til you update!

just a question, how long approximately do you think you're story will go on for? (not that im complaining about the story at all!)
Moonlit Novel chapter 8 . 2/13/2008
Plot bunnies? lol anyway great story so far
Thats For My Memory chapter 8 . 2/13/2008
Took you long enough!

Loved it!
ItalianQT chapter 7 . 2/8/2008
Good story so far! Update soon! :-)
heartfeltlove chapter 7 . 1/31/2008
Awesome chapter
Talin chapter 7 . 1/30/2008
Woot~. Thanks for the update! :D I can't wait for the next chapter.
SapphireAngel2900 chapter 7 . 1/25/2008
Love the story, but I laughed that every story you write has an M rating, and then in your A/N, you say fuckin, and then you go excuse my languagr, lol. But their is only one thing they all an go do...PARTY! They should totalie go to a club, get freaky! lmao
Tinania chapter 7 . 1/22/2008
I really like how this story is going so far. They're a cute couple. I can't wait to see what happens next!
shy green rock chapter 7 . 1/22/2008
I liked this chapter. It was short but it was down to the point. I mean yea, they finally kissed. Marina and Tristan do seem to be acting different. I guess I thought she would be more shy about the kissing and they were way too happy that Ludivine died, well temporarily.
OoohLookACat chapter 7 . 1/21/2008
perhaps by chapter twelve you will have 200 reviews

cause i am loving the story

its slightly dark

but oh so light and fluffy at the same time

loving it and can't wait for more

izzie
Singsongsamie chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
HURRY AND WRITE HURY
Jay827 chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
e. update. will we be meeting James in the next chapter? or not yet.
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