Reviews for The Thin Line
Diamandis chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
Excellent chapter, my fave so far probably lol. Upset about Our Summer though :( Update Soon!
Rachetto chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
heyy,

i really liked this chapter!

was really sweet..

Maria's really beginning to open up to him :)

update soon!

x
ConverseKicker16 chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
AH!LEMON!...well potential lemmon...I STILL LOVED IT! just the right amount of fluff! UPDATE ASAP!...you rock \m/\m/!...Chelsea
ConverseKicker16 chapter 6 . 1/20/2008
aww! ilove fluffiness!...realy good...DIE LUDIVINE! i nevere liked her from the start...good job! have a Oreo!-ChEsS!
ConverseKicker16 chapter 2 . 1/20/2008
aww! i love it...really good...keep it up! have a muffin!-ChElS
Fleeting Moment chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
I love it even more! UPDATE!
Pot chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
Uh, wow. -Sigh- makes me wish I had a vampire lover. Oh, Edward's enough for me. Update soon
ConverseKicker16 chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
i love it! seriously! my favorite line-"Oh fuck this and fuck you!” HAHAHA! totally original...CANT wait TO see WHAT comes NEXT!-ChElSeA
atreyu love chapter 7 . 1/19/2008
they are so cute!

please update~!
Tararith chapter 7 . 1/19/2008
I normally don't like vampire fics but i actually really like your story! i hope you update soon :)
people.are.strange chapter 7 . 1/19/2008
So it'll be like this for the rest of the story, eh ? Oh, I'm excited and happy as a feather. I had a smile on my face when they took their first kiss finally.
Ck90 chapter 7 . 1/19/2008
They had their first kiss! WAs she just as affected as he was? They make a good couple! Update Soon!
Nicole Deming chapter 7 . 1/19/2008
Well heres another one to add to your countdown to 200.. and if you keep updating youll get more. So quit keeping us in suspense already. I Love how cute Tristan and Marina are together. So get on with the story lol jk. but please update soon.
HazeleyedHoney chapter 7 . 1/19/2008
Aw! XD That was Hott! More hottness in the next chapter please.
Riley Hunter chapter 7 . 1/19/2008
ah, we all cuss sometimes. s'okay. and, another excellent chapter. but, now I must ask you a very important and serious question: have you ever worn two pairs of knee-socks that were different colors/patterns? anyways, excelent chappie! update soon *pout* please?
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